summer haiku, #7
first thing to do
take off these sandals
wash away the sand
(originally posted on summer haiku 2008)
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8 comments:
And this was Issa's way of doing it:)
http://haikuguy.com/issa/search.php?keywords=purifying&year=
thanks for the link, borut. :) cool haiku. :)
ha, nice... and a sensible thing to do
sensible indeed. :) thanks for the comment, polona. :)
My friend had a poem something like this:
Before you are going
to come into my bed
take off at least
your shoes...
thanks for sharing the poem, tikkis. :) as polona would say, 'tis a sensible thing to do. :)
That's great--actually something I needed to do earlier, after taking a walk which ended up being partly in the Wissahickon Creek, but didn't, so brought sand into the house again--and of course that's exactly what's great about it--taking the care in these lines about something I'm not mindful enough to do in life.
thanks for the kind words, yogaforcynics. :) nice that you can go out and walk somewhere where there's sand... none of that here unfortunately... :(
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