summer haiku, #4

it's cramped in the back
a thirteen hour road trip -
i can't stop smiling

(originally posted on summer haiku 2008)

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4 comments:

YogaforCynics said...

Very cool--cramped but smiling--really a perfect haiku, by my reckoning.

Really great site you've got here, by the way.

scatterhaiku said...

glad you liked it, yogaforcynics. :) and thanks for the kind words. :)

also, please feel free to check my linked haiku sites. i'm usually blown away by the quality of the haikus produced by these other persons. :) one can only aspire.

Borut said...

Stop(ped) driving!?:)

scatterhaiku said...

but if the drive stops, so too does the smiling. :) thanks for the comment, borut. :)