summer haiku, #4
it's cramped in the back
a thirteen hour road trip -
i can't stop smiling
(originally posted on summer haiku 2008)
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4 comments:
Very cool--cramped but smiling--really a perfect haiku, by my reckoning.
Really great site you've got here, by the way.
glad you liked it, yogaforcynics. :) and thanks for the kind words. :)
also, please feel free to check my linked haiku sites. i'm usually blown away by the quality of the haikus produced by these other persons. :) one can only aspire.
Stop(ped) driving!?:)
but if the drive stops, so too does the smiling. :) thanks for the comment, borut. :)
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